I think 2 points are appropriate for my first draft. Because my introduction attracts the audience through asking some question. And my confirmation is really strong and detail. But also, I have some grammar mistakes to correct.
2) What did you do well?
I think my confirmation is really strong. Because I refute most of things from opponents arguments based on my research.
3) What could you have done better?
I think I could have done my conclusion better. Because It has not accurate research to support my opinion. To improve my conclusion, I have to do more research to support.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best
I think my introduction and confirmation is really good. Because my introduction have all the ingredients that the introuction should have. Also through asking audience's experience about lie, I get my readers attention. And my confirmation is logical and have many information to support my opinion.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think my conclusion is weak to become final part. So I think I should do more research to make my conclusion more strong.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better
I think my confirmation is really strong. Because I refute most of things from opponents arguments based on my research.
3) What could you have done better?
I think I could have done my conclusion better. Because It has not accurate research to support my opinion. To improve my conclusion, I have to do more research to support.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best
I think my introduction and confirmation is really good. Because my introduction have all the ingredients that the introuction should have. Also through asking audience's experience about lie, I get my readers attention. And my confirmation is logical and have many information to support my opinion.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think my conclusion is weak to become final part. So I think I should do more research to make my conclusion more strong.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better
I will rewrite my conclusion with another new information. Not only for conclusion, I will do more research to support my opinion, as the time permits. Also I have to correct my grammar mistake.
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