2014년 12월 7일 일요일

Final draft

Final Draft
 
The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.
 
Have you ever told a lie? Or, have you ever noticed other people's lying? I think most people have the experience in both questions. But it is hard to distinguish lie and truth by oneself. We can just guess it based on our subjective judgment. And here is a device that can distinguish the lie, a lie detector!
The goal of a lie detector is to measure the truth from deception when giving answers to some questions. Nowadays the lie detector is widely used. It is used in the police investigation and in the court as the evidence. In addition, we need to do a lie detector test to attain a job, because certain government jobs like the FBI or CIA require the lie detector tests.
Common idea about the lie detector is that it is really accurate and reliable because it's based on the numeric data. But I think it is not accurate, so I argue that the lie detector's result for the evidence in the court is not proper. For these reasons, my argument is 'The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.'
 
Do you know that there are two types of the lie detector? Maybe no. There are polygraph and FRMI. Polygraphs are devices that monitor a person's physiological reactions. A polygraph is used to monitor changes in the body. When a person is questioned about a certain event or incident, his or her physiological reactions such as heart rate, blood pressure, respiratory rate and perspiration(sweatiness), which are different from normal levels, can be measured. (Kevin Bonsor, 2001) (Sandy Schaeffer, 2014)
Likewise, FMRI(Functional Magnetic Resonance Imaging) can distinguish the lie as the polygraph. However, there is the difference. FMRI has several ways to detect.First, BOLD(blood oxygenation level dependent) signal is used. This BOLD signal is the method for measuring the oxygen amount in the blood of brain. Second one is 'cognitive subtraction'. This process compares the picture of the brain that telling lie and telling truth. (Hong Sung Wuk, 2012)
Both Polygraph and the FMRI are the ways to distinguish the lie. However, polygraph record the physiological reactions, while the FMRI records the oxygen amount in the blood of brain.
 
First, FMRI of 'cognitive subtraction' is just relative. Most people think that vitalized parts of the brain are reacted to the lie based on the result of the FMRI. However, according to the study, there are some parts that are vitalized in FMRI but have no relative with lie. So, it means there are some vitalized parts that are not related with the lie. Therefore, some parts of the brain can be vitalized just to keep the balance in the brain. However, we can't know the reason for it. So we can only say that the FMRI of cognitive subtraction is just relative and not accurate. (Hong Sung Wuk, 2012)
Second, there are two limits in both polygraph and the FMRI. We can't remember all the thing exactly. There can have false memories. If so, why the false memory is formed? According to this research, social pressure has an effect on the recollection of people. And we can be encouraged not to think about whether our memories are real or not. Put simply, people are not able to distinguish true memory from false memory in some ways. Even, it is not accurate to judge whether the true memory is really true. (ELIZABETH F. LOFTUS, 1997)
Lastly, environment can be an obstacle to measure the lie(both of polygraph and the FMRI). A recent study found that interruption movement like moving the finger is let the credibility decrease about 33 percent. So the result of the lie detector is not accurate. The result can change according to the location of test or the mental state of the experimenter. (Hong Sung Wuk, 2012)
I also find the information about change the standard to accept evidence in the court. In 1923, there was a boy named 'Frye' who was prosecuted due to the robbery and murder. In the trial, the court rejected the evidence of the lie detector because of the lack of accuracy. This precedent has been called 'Frye Rule' after his trial. This rule became the standard of the acceptance the evidence for over 50 years. However, the principle of the 'Dovert' was created in 1993 and after that, the lie detector's result started to be accepted in the court as the evidence. Dovert principle is the principle which decide whether the evidence is appropriate to be used as the evidence before accepting the evidence. It has 4 conditions to accept the evidence. And since then, the acceptance rate of the lie detector has been on the increase. According to the statistics, 19 states in the United States of America(USA) accepted the results of the lie detectors as evidence in the court from 1993 to 2003.(Hong Sung Wuk, 2012) I don't think this tendency is desirable. And I believe three limits and one precedent can support my argument. If I say again, my view is that the result, obtained from the lie detector cannot be used in the court as the evidence.
 
Some people can argue that the lie detector is accurate because it distinguishes lie based on the accurate figure. They seem to believe that the figure is more accurate than a person's guessing. However, according to the research that I found above, there are information that tell the lie detector's record is just relative. So, even the record from the figure or the statistics, it is not accurate. (Hong Sung Wuk, 2012)
They can also argue that there is no reason to reject for an innocent person to reject to receive lie detector test. Although the person didn't commit, there are many reasons to reject lie detector tests. I will pick out one example as evidence, we can be too nervous when we are suspected, even though guiltless. And we may well worry about the misjudgment of the lie detector. The lie detector makes us nervous and scared. And the president of the USA also knew that the lie detector makes people scared. According to the conversation in the White House Oval Office, President Richard M. Nixon said "I don't know anything about polygraphs, and I don't know how accurate they are, but I know they'll scare the hell out of people."(President Nixon, 1971) Through this, also the president of the USA acknowledged the lie detector's threatening.
Also, some people may think the lie detector is a useful instruments for the evidence in the court, because it just can be used for reference to the judgment. But I don't agree with them. In the court, the evidence and reference play the important role in making judgment. Also it can turn the final judgement. But if the lie detector is used in the court as the evidence like nowadays, we have to worry about the misjudgment of the lie detector. It is evidence that some innocent people can be damaged by it, because of inaccuracy. Also, if the lie detector is used just for reference, it can have a significant effect on the judgment. It will make the judge and a member of the jury to be biased. In addition, it can be wrongfully used.
And here is the website named ''
 
Do you know the Buzz's the most notorious episode in the history of the technology? Buzz is the man who was damaged from the lie detector's inaccuracy. Buzz was charged with murder, but he is innocent. So the police suggest to do the lie detector test, and of course, Buzz accept the suggestion because he didn't commit. However, the lie detector said that he is lying about his innocent. Although he didn't commit, the lie detector determine the truth as the lie. So he have to spent some years in the prison despite he is innocent. (Vaughan Bell, 2012) How unfair he is! Who will reward Buzz's time in the prison? Through this example, we can know the lie detector's inaccuracy. And if we use the lie detector as the evidence in the court, many examples like Buzz's will occur.
Also the result of the lie detector is relative and people can have many false memories, even though they don't recognize their wrong perception. In addition, the condition can be interrupt distinguishing lie. For these reasons, I strongly argue that the lie detector is not accurate to be the evidence in the court.

Reference
Kevin Bonsor (2001) How Lie Detectors Work from
Retrieved from http://people.howstuffworks.com/lie-detector.htm
 
Sandy Schaeffer (2014). How does a lie detector (polygraph) work?
Retrieved from http://science.howstuffworks.com/question123.htm
 
Hong Sung Wuk (2012) 뇌과학, 경계를 넘다 - fMRI 거짓말 탐지기의 현재와 미래
Retrieved from http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1968069&cid=42406&categoryId=42406
 
ELIZABETH F. LOFTUS (1997) Creating False Memories
Retrieved from http://faculty.washington.edu/eloftus/Articles/sciam.htm
 
Vaughan Bell (2012) Vaughan Bell: the truth about lie detectors
Retrieved from http://www.theguardian.com/science/2012/apr/22/lie-detector-fallibility-criminal-psychology
 
President Nixon (1971) - Part of a conversation among President Nixon, Egil Krogh, John D. Ehrlichman, and H. R. Haldeman in the Oval Office between 12:36 pm and 1:00 pm on July 24, 1971 
Retrieved from https://antipolygraph.org/documents/nixon-polygraph-quotation.shtml

2014년 12월 6일 토요일

"But I know they'll scare the hell out of people"

Research : Part of a conversation among President Nixon, Egil Krogh, John D. Ehrlichman, and H. R. Haldeman in the Oval Office
Source: https://antipolygraph.org/documents/nixon-polygraph-quotation.shtml
My Topic: The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.

What I hope to learn from this source: From my peer review, friends say that if I put someone's famous saying, the essay will be more strong. So I want to find some famous saying to support my essay.

Notes. 
It is a transcript of the taped White House Oval Office conversation in which then President Richard M. Nixon uttered the infamous words, "I don't know anything about polygraphs, and I don't know how accurate they are, but I know they'll scare the hell out of people."

>>>>Final Thoughts: I will put his language in the part that telling about lie detector can make people scared.

2014년 12월 4일 목요일

About my essay from 지은

Week 14 : Peer Evaluation 2

Evaluation for 20708 - http://20708hyojeong.blogspot.kr/

Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
4점. 근거가 약한것 같다.

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
문단구분이 애매하다. 읽기에는 편하지만 classical argument를 따르고 있는지 파악하기 힘들다

Thesis
What is the thesis?
The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes

If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
The lie detector is not an accurate method to confirm the truth.

Any other thoughts?
없다.

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
Yes

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
거짓말 탐지기에 대한 소개가 너무 많은것 같다. thesis와 연결되는 부분이 어색하다.  그래도 잘썼다.

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
거짓말 탐지기에 대한 이해를 돕는 자료가 많이있다.

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
주장별로 읽기 쉽게 나뉘어져 있는점이 좋다. 하지만 2번째와 3번째의 의견이 비슷해 보이는 경향이 있다. 조금 더 근거를 많이 사용하여 주장을 뒷받침하면 해결될것 같다. 
Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
Yes

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
사례(?)를 사용하여 인상깊은 결말을  쓴것같다.

What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
문단을 정확히 나누면 더 좋은 글이 될것같다.

Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
I agreed.
When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
I still agreed

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
3가지로 나눠진 반박부분이 제일 설득력있었다.
How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?


Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
Yes

Is the research from appropriate sources?
Yes

Are the sources obvious?
그런것같다.

Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
key word인 거짓말 탐지기의 역할위주의 자료를 사용하였으므로 적절하다
Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
주장을 뒷받침할( 거짓말 탐지기가 쓰이면 안되는 이유) 과학적인 근거가 더 있으면 좋을것같다.

2014년 12월 3일 수요일

About my essay from 한별

Peer Review for 20708김효정

Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
4점. 구성과 내용은 좋았으나 아직 문법적인 요소가 다듬어지지 않은것 같기 때문이다.

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
글을 읽기 쉽게 다듬어 주면 좋을듯! 그 단락이 너무 많아서 뭐가 narration 이고 confirmation인지 구분이 안감.

Thesis
What is the thesis?
The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes

If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
거짓말 탐지기는 진실여부를 확인하기에 신뢰할 수 없는 방법이다.

Any other thoughts?
없음

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
Yes

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
독자에게 질문을 하면서 흥미를 끄는 것 같다. 하지만 introduction 짧은 것 같아서 아쉽다. 질문 뿐만 아니라 자신의 경험을 더 하면 더 재밌을 것 같다는 생각을 함.

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
Narration이 주제를 이해하기에 적절한 설명을 첨가함.

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
다양한 증거를 기본으로 주장을 잘 펼친것 같다. 환경이 거짓말을 측정하는데 장애물이될수도 있다는 주장에서 피실험자에게 편안하고 안정된 공간에서 측정하면 되지 않을까? 라는 의문이 생겼다. 

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
3가지의 반박근거를 이용해서 재반박을 할 수 없게 만든 것같다.

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
NO. 마지막 부분이 독자에게 강한 인상을 주기에 너무 짧은듯.

What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
마지막 conclusion 부분에 전문가의 말을 인용해서 독자에게 강한 인상을  심어주면 좋을듯.

Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
동의

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
계속 동의

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
마지막에 있는 refutaion에 3가지 근거를 들어 반박하는 부분이 가장 설득력 있었음.

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
딱히 없는 듯

Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
다양한 근거를 바탕으로 글을 효과적으로 작성함.

Is the research from appropriate sources?
위키피디아나 신뢰도가 떨어지는 사이트가 아니라 적절한 사이트에서 찾음.

Are the sources obvious?


Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
통계자료나 실험 등이 에세이 주제에 적합함.

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
없음

2014년 12월 2일 화요일

Peer Review 2 박대경

Peer Review 2 박대경
Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
3점, 근거자료나 사례들은 좋으나, 필요한 구성요소들이 빠져있다

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
나레이션과 마무리부분이 없는 것같은데, 기본 구조를 지켜 글을 써야할 것같다. 

Thesis
What is the thesis?
Anonymity on the Internet is important, it should not be guaranteed because of its harmful aspects.

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
그렇다 이미 디베이트의 주제로 흔히 쓰이고 있는 것으로 안다.

If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
나라면 thesis를 좀더 강하게 했을 것 같다. 

Any other thoughts?
노우

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
아직 글을 읽지 않아서 모르겠지만, 들여쓰기한 부분만 보면 4개의 파트로 나뉜것 같다.  

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
yes 일상에서 흔히하는 경험을 물음으로써 집중시키는 것 같다.

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
이 부분은 조금 부족한것 같다. 배경지식을 설명한다기 보다는 사례중심인것같다.

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
ytes

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?


Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
conclusion 이부분이 없는 것같다

What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
빠진 부분을 다시 써야한다

Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
I agree

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
still agree

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
..................................................................................................................................................

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
실제 사례를 이용하여 더 현실적으로 느껴졌다

Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
예스

Is the research from appropriate sources?
예스

Are the sources obvious?
예스

Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
예스

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
conclusion and narration have to be improved

2014년 11월 30일 일요일

Peer Review 1 방가연

Peer Review - 방가연

Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
4점
다양한 근거자료를 이용하여 자신의 주장을 강화한 점이 인상깊음

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
conclusion 부분에서 좀더 강하게 주장하면 좋을 것같다. 
Thesis
What is the thesis?
Classical music has positive influence on human.Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes and yes

If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
I also think that the classical music has positive impacts. So I will write the thesis as similar with that.

Any other thoughts?
노우

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
I can identify 5 parts easily. And I thought that there is no missing part.

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
Yes. Starting with the question leads me to read. 

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
Yrs, she explains about the Mozart Effects to understand and support the thesis.

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
그렇다. 다양한 종류의 근거로 주장을 강화한 것같다. 
하지만 쥐 실험부분을 읽으며 약간의 의문이 들었다. 이 에세이에는 얼마나 오랜기간, 혹은 시간 음악을 들려줬는지가 명확하게 나타나 있지 않는 것같다. 그래서 궁금했다. 그리고 만약 짧은 시간 음악을 들려준 것이라면 과연 그 음악이 뇌에 영향을 미칠 수 있을까? 하는 의문이 들었다.  

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
yes, 또다른 자료를 이용해 반박했다. 

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
네, 반대의견을 인정하며 단점보다는 장점이 많다는 말이 인상깊었다. 하지만 마지막 부분인 만큼 더 강하게 주장할 필요가 있는 것같다. 

What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
딱히 없는듯!

Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
I agree

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
I also agree

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
여전히 그렇게 생각함.

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
실험, 연구결과, 경험 등 다양한 사례로 근거를 들은 것 같다. 

Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
yes
Is the research from appropriate sources?
yes
Are the sources obvious?
yes

Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
yes 적절한 부분에서 근거자료를 이용함

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
없는 것 같다

2014년 11월 16일 일요일

Second Draft

Second Draft
 
The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.
 
Have you ever told a lie? Or, have you ever noticed other people's lying? I think most people have the experience in both questions. But it is hard to distinguish lie and truth by oneself. We can just guess it based on our subjective judgment. And here is a device that can distinguish the lie, a lie detector!

The goal of a lie detector is to measure the truth from deception when giving answers to some questions. Nowadays the lie detector is widely used. It is used in the police investigation and in the court as the evidence. In addition, we need to do a lie detector test to attain a job, because certain government jobs like the FBI or CIA require the lie detector tests.

Common idea about the lie detector is that it is really accurate and reliable because it's based on the numeric data. But I think it is not accurate, so I argue that the lie detector's result for the evidence in the court is not proper. For these reasons, my argument is 'The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.'
 
Everyone knows distinguishing lie is not easy. We are not sure of it, Here is the device that named 'lie detector', as I said above in the introduction. You can find the meaning and the goal of the lie detector instantly as soon as you hear it.

In the court, the evidence plays the important role in  making judgment. Also it can turn the final judgement. But If the lie detector is used in the court as the evidence like nowadays, we have to worry about the misjudgment of the lie detector. It is evindent that some innocent people can be damaged by it.
 
There is new information. Do you know that there are two types of the lie detector? Maybe no. There are polygraph and FRMI.
Polygraphs are devices that monitor a person's physiological reactions. A polygraph is used to monitor changes in the body. When a person is questioned about a certain event or incident, his or her phtsiological reactions such as heart rate, blood pressure, respiratory rate and perspiration(sweatiness), which are different from normal levels, can be measured.
 
Likewise, FMRI(Functional Magnetic Resonance Imaging) can distinguish the lie as the polygraph. However, there is the difference.
FMRI has several ways to detect. First, BOLD(blood oxygenation level dependent) sognal is used. This BOLD signal is the method for measureing the oxygen amount in the blood of brain. Second one is 'cognitive subtraction'. This process compares the picture of the brain that telling lie and telling truth.
Both Polygraph and the FMRI are the ways to distinguish the lie. However, polygraph record the physiological reactions, while the FMRI records the oxygen amount in the blood of brain.
 
First, FMRI of 'cognitive subtraction' is just relative. Most people think that vitalized parts of the brain are rekated to the liebased on the result of the FMRI. However, according to the study, there are some parts that are vitalized in FMRI but have no relative with lie. So, it means there are some vitalized parts that are not related with the lie. Therefore, some parts of the brain can be vitalized just to keep the balance in the brain. However, we can't know the reason for it. So we can only say that the FMRI of cognitive subtraction is just relative and not accurate.

Second, there are two limits in both polygraph and the FMRI. We can't remember all the thing exactly. There can have false memories. If so, why the false memory is formed? According to this research, social pressure has an effect on the recollection of people. And we can be encouraged not to think about whether our memories are real or not. Put simply, people are not able to distinguish true memory from false memory in some ways. Even, it is not accuracy to judge whether the true memory is really true.

Lastly, environment can be an obstacle to measure the lie(both of polygraph and the FMRI). A recent study found that interruption movement like moving the finger is let the credibility decrease about 33 percent. So the result of the lie detector is not accurate. The result can change according to the location of test or the mentak state of the experimenter.

I also find the information about change the standard to accept evidence in the court. In 1923, there was a boy named 'Frye' who was prosecuted due to the robbery and murder. In the trial, the court rejected the evidence of the lie detector because of the lack of accuracy. This precedent has been called 'Frye Rule' after his trial. This rule became the standard of the acceptance the evidence for over 50 years. However, the principle of the 'Dovert' was created in 1993 and after that, the lie detector's result started to be accepted in the court as the evidence. Dovert principle is the principle which decide whether the evidence is appropriate to be used as the evidence before accepting the evidence. It has 4 conditions to accept the evidence. And since then, the acceptance rate of the lie detector has been on the increase. According to the statistics, 19 states in the United States of America(USA) accepted the results of the lie detectors as evidence in the court from 1993 to 2003. I don't think this tendency is desirable. And I believe three limits and one precedent can support my argument. If I say again, my view is that the result, obtained from the lie detector caanot be used in the court as the evidence.

Some people can argue that the lie detector is accurate because it distinguishes lie based on the accurate figure. They seem to believe that the figure is more accurate than a person's guessing. They can also argue that there is no reason to reject for an innocent person to reject to receive lie detector test. They may think the lie detector is a useful instrumentsin the court because it just can be used for reference to the judgment. However, these arguments are not logical and rational. There are counter-reasons for these arguments as follows:

First, according to the research that I found above, there are information that tell the lie detector's record is just relative. So, even the record from the figure or the statistics, it is not accurate.

Second, there are many reasons to reject lie detector tests. I will pick out one example as evidence, we can be too nervous when we are suspected, although guiltless. And we may well worry about the misjudgment of the lie detector. The lie detector makes us nervous.

Lastly, if the lie detector is used just for reference, it can also have a significant effect on the judgment. It will make the judge and a member of the jury to be biased. In addition, it can be wrongfully used.
 
Do you know the Buzz's the most notorious episode in the history of the technology? Buzz is the man who was damaged from the lie detector's inaccuracy. Buzz was charged with murder, but he is innocent. So the police suggest to do the lie detector test, and of course, Buzz accept the suggestion because he didn't commit. However, the lie detector said that he is lying about his innocent. Although he didn't commit, the lie detector determine the truth as the lie. So he have to spent some years in the prison despite he is innocent. How unfair he is! Who will reward Buzz's time in the prison? Through this example, we can know the lie detector's inaccuracy. And if we use the lie detector as the evidence in the court, many examples like Buzz's will occur.

Also the result of the lie detector is relative and people can have many false memories, even though they don't recognize their wrong perception.In addition, the condition can be interrupt distinguishing lie. For these reasons, I strongly argue that the lie detector is not accurate to be the evidence in the court.

The example of the lie detector's inaccuracy

Research : 

Vaughan Bell: the truth about lie detectors

Source: http://www.theguardian.com/science/2012/apr/22/lie-detector-fallibility-criminal-psychology

My Topic: The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.

What I hope to learn from this source: I want to find the example of the person who was damaged from the lie detector's result. And I found this example through the article. 

Notes. 
The example from the article

With his dying breath, Fred Ery identified Floyd "Buzz" Fay as his murderer. "Buzz did it," he whispered to his wife, even though the assailant had covered his face and fled quickly from the scene. Ery had been shot as he worked late in his small general store but managed to give Buzz's address shortly before he died on the operating table. Only a few hours later, the police had Buzz's house in Ohio surrounded. When Buzz was charged with aggravated murder, he didn't seem particularly perturbed. "I kept thinking, they'll find the right person, they'll get this straightened out, they'll let me go tomorrow," he told the Calgary Herald, "I wasn't even going to hire a lawyer."
The county prosecutors offered Buzz a deal: they would drop all charges if he agreed to take a polygraph – a lie detector test – to prove his innocence. Convinced the whole episode was one big mistake, Buzz readily agreed. He took two tests but both suggested he was lying about his innocence. This, along with circumstantial evidence, sealed his 1979 conviction and he spent two-and-a-half years in prison for a murder he didn't commit.
During his time in prison, Buzz studied the polygraph. He sent his results to a number of experts but received wildly different interpretations. Determined to show the test was fallible, he developed a training exercise to help people fool the lie detector and after just 15 minutes of instruction, 23 out of 27 inmates beat the polygraph. Buzz was eventually exonerated, helped by the testimony of the real killer's mother, and his case has become one of the most notorious episodes in the history of the technology.
### Summary
The lie detector is not accurate and here is the example to support my opinion. Buzz was damaged by the lie detector's inaccuracy, because he is innocent, but the lie detector said he is lying about his innocent. So he spent years because of the lie detector's inaccuracy. 
>>>>Final Thoughts: Through this example, we can know the lie detector's inaccuracy. And if we use the lie detector as the evidence in the court, many examples like Buzz's will occur.

How to cheat the lie detector

Research : 

How to cheat the lie detector


My Topic: The lie detector is not accurate to use in the court as the evidence.

What I hope to learn from this source: I want to find that there are some articles to teach the way to deceive lie detectors. 

Notes.
There are four methods to deceive:
1. Prepare Well in Advance
2. Be on Your Guard
3. Learn How to Recognize Question Types
4. Apply Polygraph Countermeasures

>>>>Final Thoughts: I want to find some research which shows the lie detector is not accurate because we can even deceive lie detector. And I found pages about teaching the method of deceive lie detector. According to this article, if we follow four steps, normal people like us can deceive it! So it is not accurate.

But I found later that this information from 'wikihow'. Wikihow is similar with the Wikipedia as everyone can register their knowledge. And I determined it is not accurate for my research. Therefore I didn't use it. 

2014년 11월 9일 일요일

Self Evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric: 
I think 2 points are appropriate for my first draft. Because my introduction attracts the audience through asking some question. And my confirmation is really strong and detail. But also, I have some grammar mistakes to correct.


2) What did you do well?
I think my confirmation is really strong. Because I refute most of things from opponents arguments based on my research.

3) What could you have done better?
I think I could have done my conclusion better. Because It has not accurate research to support my opinion. To improve my conclusion, I have to do more research to support.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best
 I think my introduction and confirmation is really good. Because my introduction have all the ingredients that the introuction should have. Also through asking audience's experience about lie, I get my readers attention. And my confirmation is logical and have many information to support my opinion.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think my conclusion is weak to become final part. So I think I should do more research to make my conclusion more strong.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better 
I will rewrite my conclusion with another new information. Not only for conclusion, I will do more research to support my opinion, as the time permits. Also I have to correct my grammar mistake.